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Through the brightness before him were (h) coals of fire kindled.
(h) By this description of a tempest he declares the power of God against his enemies.
Through the brightness before him were coals of fire kindled. See Gill on Psalm 18:12.
The splendour of the divine nature enveloped in clouds breaks through the dark covering in burning coals of fire. The coals of fire which burst forth, i.e., which break out in flame from the dark clouds, are the lightning which shoots forth from the dark storm-clouds in streams of fire.
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